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My flop idea: It starts out with britney waking up and as she starts the first verse she holds a picture of her and a man, she then looks at a ring right next to it which hints at them having been married (she has it off and was alone in bed and it has a really depressing vibe so the viewers can take the hints) it then shows flashbacks of them in romantic moments like you said. Then the chorus starts and it shows a scene where they're fighting and britney throws something at him and he kicks the door open and goes out, the room is shown as a mess hinting at something big having happened, the last few seconds of the chorus you can see britney pick up his phone, which he left behind and look at a picture of him kissing another woman, the audio stops, scene fades to black and goes back to current britney who then picks up the phone, which she kept all these years. Second verse starts and britney looks up again to the photo and the audio starts again and viewers are taken to the past again where past britney wakes up and goes into his room and he's not there (again very depressing atmosphere and very depressed look on Britney's face) it then shows the boyfriend walking on a abandoned street at night, a bunch of robbers come out and beat him up and stab him, the second verse ends, audio stops for the next 3 second scene which is when we are taken to past Britney's house as she watches the news and sees "Man beat up and stabbed, currently at ____ hospital and blah blah blah" and sees the picture of her husband (It's husband even though i call him boyfriend alot ) the second chorus starts and we see britney impatiently in traffic and she is close to the hospital so she gets out of the car and runs even tripping one time and the breakdown starts and we see britney running into all rooms in the hospital with worry and anxiety in her face, she find her lover and holds his hand, the breakdown ends and right before the final chorus it focuses on the guys face and he says "I'm sorry...I will always love you" in a whisper and we hear the beep of his monitor and the final chorus starts and we see britney screaming (SEE not hear) and her face against her hands while she's on her knees. After the final chorus ends it fades into current britney who then gets ready to go somewhere and we see her and a little girl probably like 4 years old walking by her. They then stop at a grave with a depressed britney and the little girl looking neutral. She then says "Why is it that every time you tell me i'm going to meet daddy, we always come here?" britney looks down at her with pain in her eyes and says "This is your daddy dear" the girl remains quiet and the cameras move up to the sky while Britney says "There are precious things in life that we take for granted, we never know when we might lose them, for all we know an apparent normal day could be the final goodbye, when you do lose that someone, try not to cry, they don't wanna see you cry" and then the video ends. Thoughts?