Emb Posted October 27, 2015 Author #26 Report Share Posted October 27, 2015 what will be britney's reaction if she'll hear this line: And I wanna kiss your sweaty lips? it's a mistype Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emb Posted November 8, 2015 Author #27 Report Share Posted November 8, 2015 In a few days the song will be recorded in a studio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mannequiney Posted November 8, 2015 #28 Report Share Posted November 8, 2015 Well, you have talent, but i think you have to fix little things about the lyrics, they sound like you want to have a relationship with her and i don't think that's what you mean with the song and don't listen to the rude people here 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike. Posted November 8, 2015 #29 Report Share Posted November 8, 2015 You guys need to stop right now,i don't want this place to become and to be seen like exhell any more There's no need to be rude, at least give a constructive opinion if u don't like it ! Ban for y'all tbh 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blair Posted November 8, 2015 #30 Report Share Posted November 8, 2015 that's very coo i like the line i want to kiss your sweety lips you forgot to put a suicidal line too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mannequiney Posted November 9, 2015 #31 Report Share Posted November 9, 2015 You guys need to stop right now,i don't want this place to become and to be seen like exhell any more There's no need to be rude, at least give a constructive opinion if u don't like it ! Ban for y'all tbh Exactly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ari Posted November 9, 2015 #32 Report Share Posted November 9, 2015 Well, you have talent, but i think you have to fix little things about the lyrics, they sound like you want to have a relationship with her and i don't think that's what you mean with the song and don't listen to the rude people here Yeah I agree. It sounds like you wanna have a relationship with her so bad... lol It's like an unrequited love song or something I like the melody though. Maybe change some of the lyrics especially the parts where you say "I'm dying inside" and "I wanna kiss your sweety(?) lips" Other than that, I see it could be something really cool! I hope to hear the full demo with the changes. Good luck! PS: Don't mind those rude comments smh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X-Ander Posted November 9, 2015 #33 Report Share Posted November 9, 2015 I am in, please pm me and tell me what do i have to do! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenlicious Posted November 9, 2015 #34 Report Share Posted November 9, 2015 I wish this song could be more like 'happy and fun' instead of sad and depressing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emb Posted November 9, 2015 Author #35 Report Share Posted November 9, 2015 Thank you, guys, for kind words! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blair Posted November 9, 2015 #36 Report Share Posted November 9, 2015 i want to see the fans lipsynching that line "Britney i want to kiss your sweety lips" 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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