Piece Of Me Dvd (Update)

[hyoga]

it looks really nice can't wait

[TheSnake]

I thought the start was very good. But it went on too long without any text sand with just the same instrumental. You should've had your text at the start, then had clips with 'piece of me' instrumental, then you should've, halfway through put 'the (short clip) queen (short clip) of pop (slightly longer clip) is back' then gone into a faster instrumental with some vocals then ended with a bang of a laugh or something

For your first one though, it was good

[TheSnake]

I thought the start was very good. But it went on too long without any text sand with just the same instrumental. You should've had your text at the start, then had clips with 'piece of me' instrumental, then you should've, halfway through put 'the (short clip) queen (short clip) of pop (slightly longer clip) is back' then gone into a faster instrumental with some vocals then ended with a bang of a laugh or something

For your first one though, it was good

[Pieceofmeshow]

I thought the start was very good. But it went on too long without any text sand with just the same instrumental. You should've had your text at the start, then had clips with 'piece of me' instrumental, then you should've, halfway through put 'the (short clip) queen (short clip) of pop (slightly longer clip) is back' then gone into a faster instrumental with some vocals then ended with a bang of a laugh or something

For your first one though, it was good

Thank you for your honest opinion! Im not an audio editor or a video one its just something i put toghther !

[TheSnake]

Oh maybe you could have done the first bit of text as an intro then shown great performances then put 'the (short Pom clip) queen (short Pom clip) of pop (slightly longer Pom clip) then shown loads of great clips really fast of Pom then BAM! Put your poster of 'coming in July' then the screen goes black then have her laugh in the background.

But yeh I appreciate you aren't an audio editor so well done

[Pieceofmeshow]

Oh maybe you could have done the first bit of text as an intro then shown great performances then put 'the (short Pom clip) queen (short Pom clip) of pop (slightly longer Pom clip) then shown loads of great clips really fast of Pom then BAM! Put your poster of 'coming in July' then the screen goes black then have her laugh in the background.

But yeh I appreciate you aren't an audio editor so well done

loved your idea!! Are you an audio editor?

[Pieceofmeshow]

Oh maybe you could have done the first bit of text as an intro then shown great performances then put 'the (short Pom clip) queen (short Pom clip) of pop (slightly longer Pom clip) then shown loads of great clips really fast of Pom then BAM! Put your poster of 'coming in July' then the screen goes black then have her laugh in the background.

But yeh I appreciate you aren't an audio editor so well done

loved your idea!! Are you an audio editor?

[Pieceofmeshow]

Oh maybe you could have done the first bit of text as an intro then shown great performances then put 'the (short Pom clip) queen (short Pom clip) of pop (slightly longer Pom clip) then shown loads of great clips really fast of Pom then BAM! Put your poster of 'coming in July' then the screen goes black then have her laugh in the background.

But yeh I appreciate you aren't an audio editor so well done

loved your idea!! Are you an audio editor?

[BritneyBitch10]

Oh maybe you could have done the first bit of text as an intro then shown great performances then put 'the (short Pom clip) queen (short Pom clip) of pop (slightly longer Pom clip) then shown loads of great clips really fast of Pom then BAM! Put your poster of 'coming in July' then the screen goes black then have her laugh in the background.

But yeh I appreciate you aren't an audio editor so well done

omgg your idea is super cool

[Pieceofmeshow]

Do You Guys Have Any Questions About My Pom Dvd ?

[djkeith78]

trailer looks good..  can't wait to see the whole thing 

[Nelli Gaidai]

will see it once its done! thanks for doing this 

[TheSnake]

loved your idea!! Are you an audio editor?

nope. im just kinda like...like...like you know like that. and thats when my mom realised that i was a creative person

[Aloha....B]

epic!  can't wait for the dvd